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From My Mind
Contributed by
Opium
on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Darkness once again, as the clouds fill the sky
And the rain starts to fall, and my eyes start to lie
Seeing a figure walking in my room
A moving ghost in the mystic gloom
I've been living alone for long long years
Eating on my agony and drinking from my tears
This banshee appears to be so real
Strange emotions of longing is what I feel
In the coldness of the night this specter spoke
As the words flew from her mouth like a silver smoke
She said something so sweet and full of grace
That overwhelmed me and put a smile on my face
This voice that I knew and loved for so long
Removed all my fears and made me strong
She spoke my name in a heavenly way
That left me speachless with no words to say
She came back to me in a vision so true
She came back to me, but now she flew
From where she came I may never find
I hope she's real, not just a poltergeist from my mind
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Opium
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2002-11-06 10:30:00]
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Re: From My Mind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:55:13 AM AEST
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| Very nice! This gave me a great mental image. Geat write! |
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Re: From My Mind
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 11:43:02 AM AEST
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| I liked this it gave me goose bumps! I feel this with my mom a lot! Great write!Christina |
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Re: From My Mind
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:25:42 PM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful!!
This was a really good write
I enjoyed this alot
Keep em' coming
i want to read more
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: From My Mind
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by gina on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:14:49 PM AEST
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| i really wanna see my bf for a while , a ghost of him, a shadow .. i dont care ,but the problem is that it s not workin 4 me , so can i borrow ur magical mind for seconds plz , promise to return it b4 u even notice :P |
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Re: From My Mind
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 09:00:47 AM AEST
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| I really like this. Very nice write. |
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