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Pause for Thought
Contributed by
neveryours
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:12:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Time moves in such a sordid pace,
And I pause here for thought
The stars wink in infinite grace
Not knowing they forgot
The world in shifting shape appeals
To senseless murmurs here
Every thoughtless word congeals
The path that no one steers
I wonder at the sky above
A clarity unknown
To those who mumble stumble love
Yet wind up here alone
A wise and worthy plan I’m sure
Did set this path in place
But I am small, and not so pure
And easy to replace.
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neveryours
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2004-09-08 05:12:46]
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Re: Pause for Thought
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by brew on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:02:40 AM AEST
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| Flowing and deep write. |
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Re: Pause for Thought
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:08:40 AM AEST
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| Yes, I like the flow too. It's focused and simple. I like it. |
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Re: Pause for Thought
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by wray on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:19:59 AM AEST
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| Mm thoughtful tho slightly depressing. I really enjoy your style of writing, there's something very sweet about it.. keep it up. |
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