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Shades Of Red
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:45:04 AM in AEST
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Standing all alone,staring straight ahead
Looking at the sunset, beautiful shades of red
The warmth that it sends you, the glow it is emitting
Makes you realise, that life is really worth living
The way it sweeps downwards, all over the land
Transforms it to picturesque, instead of looking bland
They say red sky at night, a shepherds delight
I say it's everyones, a wonderful sight
Ready to return to my house and shut my back door
One last glance upwards, to see the sky once more
The sun is down so very low, I feel I could reach out, touch it
But to bed I will go, smiling, awaiting my next sunset
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parkman
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2004-09-08 02:45:04]
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Re: Shades Of Red
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:59:05 AM AEST
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Beautifully described sunset. Sunsets make a wonderful topic for poetry. Excellent piece.
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Re: Shades Of Red
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:14:14 AM AEST
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Well written and beautifully described.
I could see it. |
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Re: Shades Of Red
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by brew on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:50:33 AM AEST
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| beautiful picture, painted there. Got the visual, like on a warm ummers eve on the beach.as the sun, drops off and out of sight. Liked this write! |
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Re: Shades Of Red
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:21:00 AM AEST
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ohhhhhhhhhh this is beautiful nothing better to end a day than those awesome sunsets.Do you live in the desert perchance? My travels and living in one now have proven to be the most beautiful sunsets Iv ever seen.Enchanted write
Michelle |
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Re: Shades Of Red
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:10:07 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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