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Repetition
Contributed by
blue_mmb
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Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:25:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've been down this path before
I've seen the broken glass along the shore
From a distance beauty gleams
Up close there shines a different sheen
I reach to touch the glistening jewels
Not realizing I'm such a fool
I walk away with blood red wounds
And yet I know I shall return
A lesson tought, not a lesson learned
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2004-09-08 01:25:08]
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Re: Repetition
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:37:29 AM AEST
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SO sad yet so true.
take care.good write. |
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Re: Repetition
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:42:09 AM AEST
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must everything be a lesson
Can't some of it be enjoyable pleasures
just by the pain of things? |
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Re: Repetition
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 03:23:01 PM AEST
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| What I really like about this poem is the fact that I can relate to it so easily. If i was the main character there, i'd probably be bleeding to death. Short an sweet, really makes u think, overall good read. |
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