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Your Canvas
Contributed by
Sugah
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:06:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You were just a canvas
As blank and untouched as I
Too hurt to hide emotion
Too terrified to cry
You were stubborn and immovable
Like an angel without it's wings
Too deep inside your misery
To notice the better things
But I see you moving forward
Slowly finding paint
The change is very sudden
Yet so very faint
Now, you've become so colourful
Not like you used to be
With no need to look back
For all you've left behind is me.
Copyright ©
Sugah
... [
2004-09-08 01:06:09]
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Re: Your Canvas
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:03:25 AM AEST
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It's perfect as is.
Sad but so sweet.
good work.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your Canvas
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:36:34 AM AEST
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I agree with Em. Your title is best.
Good write. |
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Re: Your Canvas
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by poetmarie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:21:43 AM AEST
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| This is very sweet. And I like the title as is. |
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Re: Your Canvas
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by Starlilly on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:40:58 PM AEST
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omgosh this is amazing!
GREAT work! |
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