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Dark Relfections
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:47:28 PM in AEST
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Sun will be shining
My shoulders seem to stretch so tall
The moon reflects so beautifully in your eyes
And it's just your beauty afterall
Well, beautiful angel
When the sun will be shining on and bright and tall
It seems you've forgotten the sparkle in your eye
And it's just time getting the best of you afterall
So, read me like a book tonight
Though I might not seem right now so tall
I know a smile will spread across you
Even it's a memory afterall
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Exodus-On-Life
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2004-09-07 23:47:28]
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Re: Dark Relfections
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:54:03 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: Dark Relfections
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by Silent_Composer on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:44:16 AM AEST
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Written well, Awesome flow, and plenty of rythm.
Painted a clear picture, like it from beginning to end.
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Re: Dark Relfections
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:00:48 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write |
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