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I Love My Car
Contributed by
Sophie_taylor
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:08:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I LOVE MY CAR
I LOVE MY CAR
MY BRIGHT YELLOW CAR
IT CAN TAKE ME NEAR
IT CAN TAKE ME FAR
THE V8 ENGINE
THE SHINY NEW MAGS
IT RUNS OFF NOTHING
BUT THE SMELL OF OILY RAGS
AS I DRAG RACE IN THE STREET
NEON LIGHTS AND ALL
I THRASH IT, I SMASH IT
I THINK IT LOOKS COOLBY SOPHIE TAYLOR AND JASON RANDALL
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2004-09-07 23:08:29]
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Re: I Love My Car
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 03:15:06 AM AEST
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| Please comment on this poem as the boy i wrote it for is suffering from cancer and he wants to know if you like it |
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Re: I Love My Car
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 03:36:55 AM AEST
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Jason, is that your friend's name?
I like it - this reminds me of my times on the local drag, the smell of petrol, the passengers nails in the dashboard, the sparking undercarriage, hissing turbines . . . *drifts*
Ahh . . . vehicular onslaught. |
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