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My Witches Brew (Final)
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My Witches Brew (Final)
Things keep getting better
as each day passes by
Sometimes I am so happy
I cannot help but cry
These feelings that I am having
like none, I have ever had
Always feeling wonderful
never being sad
All those years I spent were wasted
For sure and I now know
But better late than never
to get on with my new road show
You just cannot believe
the difference it has made
This new life that i have
That I will never trade
To have my love with me
who changed my way of life
I will forever be his faithful
ever loving wife
I thank you God, for doing this
making a new person out of me
A truly happy converted witch
that the whole world is able to see
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-07 22:41:18]
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by Sordida on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:03:54 PM AEST
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| I really liked this work. Some of the lines you used in the beginning really hit me and I understood what you were saying. |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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enjoyable read once again Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:52:26 AM AEST
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Lol a very nice ending .
job well done or should i say well write.
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:15:43 PM AEST
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The conclusion is as wonderful as the rest Bruce. The brew is complete. Never loose the formula...
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:37:41 PM AEST
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Brilliant conclusion.
May your love be blessed together always
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Final)
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:01:53 PM AEST
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lovely ending to the story
well written |
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