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Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:40:55 PM in AEST
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Ragdoll
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A Tale Of Rape
Beautiful girl with the long blonde hair
The one that causes all the boys to stare
Pretty smile and inviting eyes
To this child is her demise
Attracting men far from her age
The type of men who should be caged
Evil thoughts race through their mind
Plotting, hoping, waiting for time
And like a cat they suddenly pounce
On her tiny frame, that doesn’t weight an ounce
Leaving her scared, dazed and confused
Like a ragdoll, she’s been used
Innocence taken, given is fear
That will last through out her years
This precious child forever gone
From the man who caused her harm
Still today, although she’s grown
She runs to another broken home
Trying to find peace inside
From the demons, she tries to hide
And yet the man who caused her pain
Lives far away, using another name
Looking for the pretty girl
That he can again get his thrill
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:46:02 PM AEST
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Wo now,
U got this one right on the money.
Still the rag doll never gives up hopes of inner peace.
I know from experience as the one raped.
You have written a masterpeice of truth here.
great job.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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Sadly.....I can relate. (date rape). This happens to many girls.... but to everyone out there...it's not your fault and go out and kick some ***. Wonderful write.
ALINA |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:55:02 PM AEST
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Such a sad tale, Jeff..I can only imagine what her life is like..... or the life of any one who has been abused this way....
Well written...
Jenni |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
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| amazing write. some people need to die... |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by wild_girl121 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:54:25 PM AEST
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wow you got that right jeff, i hate when guys act all tuff and bad but then they just use you for a one night delite
great write. keep posting !
angie |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:13:30 PM AEST
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| Robbing an innocent child of her innocence and her childhood..what could be a worse sin? |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:51:07 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful but tragic, i have never been harmed in this way, but i can begin to imagine the pain and confusion i would be in if i was. wonderful wirte, thankyou for sharing |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by MsScissors on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:07:39 AM AEST
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| The rhyme is a little forced and a couple revisions in word choice would be good. regarding the subject matter, one in every two women is raped in her life time. 3 out of every five boys. and these statistics are low. Rape is an epidemic perpetuated by a sexist culture with a fetish for disempowering others as a means of empower ones self. It's encouraged by a sexist media. Way to go on bringing your voice to this issue. |
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Re: Ragdoll ( A Tale Of Rape )
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by Solnubis on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 04:11:50 PM AEST
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| It was a good poem, the ending was a little off something was missing. But just out of curiosity you being a male what made you write a poem about this topic. Now I'm going by the name Jeff which maybe could be a womans name. But don't get my question wrong I was just curious. I also had a concern in the first paragragh of the poem. It almost seems as if it's the girls fault because she has inherited this bueaty. Just an observation. |
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