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FLOAT ON DOWN
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:35:31 PM in AEST
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~Storm Wolf~
SultryRose's Signatures
Charlie left too much water behind
Now you're bracing for Francis, oh my.
Water every where You may turn
Your voice makes my heart burn.
Grab a wave, float on down, on down
to Arkansas, standing on dry ground.
Float on down to waiting arms
Yes, I'll dazzle U with country charms.
We've so much catching up to do
Alone, no inhabitions, jus me-n-U.
We'll throw away our boring clocks
Roam around without any socks.
Let's kiss away lonliness, my dear
Total luv without ever touching fear.
We don't gotta sleep jus live on our dreams.
Anxious to touch you to extreme's.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 09:12:25 PM AEST
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Ohh La La....is this love is feel in the air!!!
Great write Emygrrl.... Have fun!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 09:48:15 PM AEST
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oh this poem was so beautifully written. love it from start to finish great job.
Brandy |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:11:00 PM AEST
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| excellent lyrics. |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Odessa19 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:59:20 PM AEST
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Very very good. i especially love the end set.. it solidifies your feelings..
Continue with your talent. |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:39:41 AM AEST
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nice bit of lyric writing, one day the break you need will come!
wildejohnny
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:51:14 AM AEST
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| Hello Emy yes Francis did bring water but no to where it is badly needed. Tw years ago here in Southern Austria we had a long period of drought there was no ground water left and Farms had to plough in the crops that did not grow through ack of water. This year we have had plenty of rain and the wells are full again thank goodness. I like your poem it was great hugs from bernard. |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by critterhideaway on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:51:32 AM AEST
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| Wow very good, hope you get that visit. Thanks |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:35:28 AM AEST
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It seems like I have waited FOREVER to read this much anticipated poem! (Actually it was only over night but it seemed longer) I think you did an incredible job and your love, rare relationship, big heart & depth just shines in this poem. It was all that I thought it could be. Very very very well done! You even have a poetic soul when just simply writing little notes----your poetic nature comes out every time.
You always have a kind word, a sweet comment that is so positive and I appreciate the time that you take to show your kindness.
I hope Virginia and Arkansas find their way towards each other and...................... SOON! Or i'll have to call up destiny and put a rush on it....
*Smiling*
Kie |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Silent_Composer on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 01:56:21 AM AEST
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Awesome write, intense pictures, with very vivid images and emotions.
Beautifully written thank you for sharing.
~Silence~ |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Spike on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:07:08 AM AEST
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A sweet invitation, definitely geared as lyrics and ripe for a good acoustic accompaniment. I love how you add graphics to the mix - I haven't mastered that one yet. Save the poem for each new cyclone, just change the names until he gets the hint!
Spike |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:24:38 PM AEST
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| Very emotional and heartfelt. Great lyrics. |
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Re: FLOAT ON DOWN
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 07:28:17 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. Kind of reminds me of the stories I hear about first love. |
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