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I am Snail food.(repost from Mick's old site)
Contributed by
Kay-P-M-Devenish
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:02:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Slimy snails leave their trails,
throughout the garden patch,
I would chase them if I could
but,
they're too hard to catch.
I have no legs,
I have no feet,
on me...they love to feed,
I
r e a l l y
am
QUITE
'in a bind'
for...
I
am
JUST ....
a weed !
Copyright ©
Kay-P-M-Devenish
... [
2004-09-07 20:02:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I am Snail food.(repost from Mick's old site)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Versifier on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST (User
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Awesome poem.(I am not under 8 though a couple yrs older hehe.) The poem made me want to smile especially its conclusion. I have to say, I envy your abilities.^_^. You turned a normal happening into a magnificent piece of writing.Kudos^_^. |
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Re: I am Snail food.(repost from Mick's old site)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:57:26 PM AEST (User
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Enjoyed this again, Kay.... Glad you're reposting....
Your old friend,
Jenni |
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Re: I am Snail food.(repost from Mick's old site)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 09:06:30 PM AEST (User
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I have a 4 y/o grandson who will absolutely adore this. Thank you so much.
Rita |
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Re: I am Snail food.(repost from Mick's old site)
(User Rating: 1 ) by veramouse on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:50:50 AM AEST (User
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yay.............................
slimey.......
happy......
garden...
stuff..
loved it..
Vera. |
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