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Veritas
Contributed by
Sordida
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:40:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why do I do things?
I know I should not
I make things a fool
And then I get caught
I hate the experience
And I hate the lies
I hate the depression
That follows my crimes
One day I’ll just end it
I know that I will
I’ll be thinking of you
As I take my last pill
But remember that I love you
As i leave you here
It’s the world that I hated
The pain and the fear
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-09-07 13:40:01]
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Re: Veritas
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:13:00 PM AEST
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Your poem is so sad, brought a tear to eye.
Life is beautiful and no problem is so great that it dosen't work itself out. Remember all those you love and those who love you.
Keep writing, it helps |
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Re: Veritas
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by Maylaur on
Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 02:07:48 PM AEST
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| I found this to be a very strong poem. The sadness and the guilt is almost overwhelming :-( |
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