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°°°Devil With A Halo°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You were cast from heaven, never to return
You made hell your home where you live and burn
You take our hurt feelings and make us feel safe
You then make us feel like we are the mistake
You sit and whisper how ugly we are
You take fruit from our souls, and cast it far
You pretend to be good you lure so many things
Devil with a halo you destroy so many dreams
You put razors in candy on halloween
You give death to drunk drivers on new years eve
You take children's emotions and use them up
Till they feel no good, and want to give up
You take Valentine's Day and you make people fight
You use everything for your own hateful spite
You Take Easter Day and you make us egg cars
Devil with a halo you are very smart
You take 4th of July and you burn people's skin
You hurt them on purpose while you sit in your den
You use Thanksgiving as your own feasting day
To prey on our souls and to cause heart decay
You take Christmas away from so many of us
You laugh at the poor and you make a big fuss
You have so much time upon your hands
Devil with a halo to me you are not a man
You can say you have so many children of your own
But i say Sir Devil because of you my soul has grown
You are an imposter, your certainly a thief
You want us to take your mark, the mark of the beast
You can sit in your halo and pretend your from heaven
And make things seems good in folds of seven
You can boil in your greed, lust and lava of fire
Devil with a halo you will never be admired
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-06 08:00:00]
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:06:43 AM AEST
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| Another masterpiece! |
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by stephy on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 08:49:07 AM AEST
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| very nicely done. i enjoyed reading it. good write. |
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 09:24:24 AM AEST
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Great write, OreO...loved it!!!
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by TheBirdMan on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 12:57:22 PM AEST
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| great wording, I liked this alot... |
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:49:03 PM AEST
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| so cool! |
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:46:06 PM AEST
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Wow OreO this is excellent. I read the title and though it might be about me and I was a little disapointed it wasn't, but it's amazing.
Such Talent You Have!!
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:35:31 PM AEST
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| Nice write Oreo. You tell that devil where he can go! |
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Re: °°°Devil With A Halo°°°
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by TypoDemon on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 02:29:52 AM AEST
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| wow.. I enjoyed that greatly. Good right M'lady. |
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