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I Don't Wanna Fight No More
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:48:31 AM in AEST
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I don’t wanna fight no more,
On love I don’t want to close the door,
We share a very precious gift,
I know together we can get over this rift.
I am determined to make you & me work,
Take from your heart all the hurt,
Show you that I am willing & strong,
To make amends for all my wrongs.
We should love not fight,
Hold each other long into the night,
Look deep into each others eyes,
Let’s laugh instead of all the cries.
You & me are made for one another,
In you I have found more than just a lover,
We will get back to where we were,
The path just hasn’t been that clear.
Our love is strong & can withstand,
Anything in this given land,
I know now you will need some space,
That your love for me can’t be erased.
I love you from the bottom of my toes,
I’ll shout it out so the whole world knows,
Tonight I’ll take you into my loving arms,
For once & for all make the storm calm.
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pixie
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2004-09-07 11:48:31]
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:18:26 PM AEST
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| I hope for you pixie, great write and make him read it xxxxx |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by RhythmBndt on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:18:41 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write sweetheart. Good luck with your relationship. |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:17:08 PM AEST
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Lovely and touching write...Hope it all works out for you both..
Hugs
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:56:55 PM AEST
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*hugs you lots*
I know you can do it hunni.
Things will be ok,
Just stay strong. *hugs*
I know it's hard. I will always be here for you.
Phil xxx |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 02:53:45 PM AEST
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A wonderful heartfelt write. I would show this to him because it says so much.
May it all work out and may you find the calm that you need.
Don't ever stop writing Pixie, it would be a loss to the world who enjoys poetry.
Kie |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:05:01 PM AEST
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| beautiful writing pixie... i know you'll get this worked out... good luck! * |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:09:54 AM AEST
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If you both love each other and want it to work, it will. This is another great, emotional piece.
WinterFawn |
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:14:34 AM AEST
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good luck! with your relationship good write too.
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Re: I Don't Wanna Fight No More
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by Solnubis on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:47:21 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. |
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