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i dunno...
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:59:48 AM in AEST
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all these words fly out the window
followed by a trail of cloudy smoke
it's raining kittens and puppies today
and this tired brain is soaked
confusion is a friend
that leads me up its path and back
when you say it all again
speak soft
speak slow
cos every last uttering is utterly fluttering
out all open doors
so with a heaving sigh
there's nothing i can say
but i dunno
i dunno
i dunno.
Copyright ©
hannahbanana
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2004-09-07 08:59:48]
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Re: i dunno...
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by subgenius on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 08:11:16 PM AEST
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| Is this poem about being confused? That's what I interpreted from it but that's the fun thing about poetry. Pretty sweet poem as I see this with many possible interpretations |
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Re: i dunno...
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by KarlaMarie on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:59:46 AM AEST
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i think this was about boredom? was it?
if so it begs the question does boredom help you write too?
if so get bored more often.
much enjoyed
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