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breaking me

Contributed by angel_facing_judgement on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:53:58 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

resume yourself and go on breaking me down, ill close my eyes and you, you just let me fall. color me. color me red color me black color me blue...let the bruises show through. i only did this because you told me to, cant remember, my past exceeding, this is my path and you are leading. let it go and let it fall,because you cant see your past is bleeding...i guess by now you would have seen, but being you you're just to mean, i would have stayed i would have lived, but you change the whole freakin way i feel. it isnt worth it, it isnt fair, well i guess thats why you just pushed me down these stupid stairs, another way to go on breaking me

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Re: breaking me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetryman30 on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:03:24 AM AEST
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Your emotions show very clearly in this piece, angel. If possible, you need to get away from this relationship, be it with a parent or a lover.

Technically, this would read better if it was broken into verses (just my opinion)...but you conveyed your emotions regardless of the form and that's what poetry is all about...

Well done...PM30

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