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closetfriends
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:22:46 AM in AEST
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dreams and wishes meet their ends,
smoking with my closet friends,
laughter doth persuade me,
how vibrant you have made me,
for nothing i would trade,
this friendship is saved,
everything has its time ,
we are listning to sublime,
you know just how i feel,
together time we kill,
on beanbags of blue we sit,
we just cant forget,
all the long chats we had,
helping eachother when we felt sad,
we will meet again some sunny day......
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Re: closetfriends
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:35:17 AM AEST
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| A very nice smiley poem.... |
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Re: closetfriends
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:53:08 AM AEST
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I know this feeling. Sublime is an excellent choice of words. You have conveyed this well.
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Re: closetfriends
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 09:02:43 AM AEST
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sounds like you have found a time of remembering....keep up the excellent work
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Re: closetfriends
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:43:24 PM AEST
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Man.... I loved this. "Smoking with my closet friends..." sound like your hotboxing with some reefer and Sublime tunes. Sublime is my fav. band. Your poem resembles how it is with me and some of my closest buddies. SUBLIME..... a band for the "stoners." At least.... I think that is what this poem is about. If not...sorry... but none the less this poem KICKED ***!!!!!!
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