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unexpected,unknown,untitled,love...

Contributed by veenu on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:43:02 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

its raining from the time ,
i first loved your everything,
it really make me to think,
you too in the ring where my power extend.....
due to this moisture because of raining in my heart caused ironed blood got rust..............................
is it already known to be just,
every part of my cell had,
got layered of this rust,
by this sacred layer ,
i have scared....
must,
i loose you,
got confuse...........................
i have genetically changed,
the layer cause my cells to proliferate,
and causing a cancer of your taste..............
dont know now what is in fate,
there is no drug to stop there rate...............
but dear love,
still wait,
i make your state,
that u will find true love when you listen........
and make you to think who was he..........
but its too late to be..............................................................
may i cant remain with this type of stain(cancer),
when i become invisible(dead) due to this pain,
i will miss you there,
waiting for you and running here and there in search of you..................................
when i miss you very much there,
i will rock every part there................
if i can look you from there than
what could be.........................................................................
everything i dare......................................................................................................................................
when i want to laugh there,
the teeth cant appear,........................
then with red eyes,
i will stare at god,
why he apart me here(on earth),
i want to go forever there,
where i can find (her) who love and care.......................................................................

Copyright © veenu ... [ 2004-09-07 04:43:02]
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Re: unexpected,unknown,untitled,love... (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:48:43 AM AEST
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i love this pem and i had write with all the depth of my heart..................still practising to catch my love once she said i love you..................and went..............but a twist here
well try my best

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