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Isn't It A Pity
Contributed by
S_K_Williamson
on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Isn't it a pity
how people waste their lives
They walk this world
full of rage, packing guns and knives
They come in through your window
grab you as you lie in bed
Rob you of your dignity
shoot or stab you 'till you're dead
They will take away your sanity
as they destroy your home
Smoke your last damned cigarette
and disconnect your phone
A foot goes through the tv screen
vcr gets stomped upon the floor
Aunt Mable's favorite flower vase
picked up and smashed into the door
All around you lays the mess
once tributes from your past
Who ever knew life could change
so violent or so fast
Isn't it a pity
how people waste their lives
Crawl our world, full of rage
packing guns and knives
Copyright ©
S_K_Williamson
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2004-09-07 01:40:30]
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:49:22 AM AEST
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yes it's a great pity but oh so true.
It's hard to comprehend some things but Jesus knows all.
Great writin!
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:51:39 AM AEST
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Yes, SK - it IS a pity! I do hope this write is fiction (they detail has me worrying that it's not). So many people are touched by violence. It's sad really... and seems so entirely unnecessary from where I'm sitting.
Thanks for sharing this. You're point is well taken-
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:55:16 AM AEST
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Wow that is so damn true.
good write. |
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:25:36 AM AEST
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The world is made up of all kinds of people, and unfortunately these are some of them. I do hope this didn't happen to you. Good write.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:25:24 PM AEST
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yes, sharon, a true pity, why we all cant be nice i dont know, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Isn't It A Pity
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:05:24 PM AEST
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A STRONG STATEMENT OF TRUTH FROM A LOVELY POET
Excellent work Sharon.
Best wishes always
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