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My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:21:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How wonderful it has been
with this new witches life
To have become a loving person
and a wonderful man's happy wife
All those long wasted years
doing the wrong thing
Now having the chance
for happiness to bring
To him, to me and
to everyone we now know
To show all the other witches
the true and right way to go
I hope I am able to convert
many more like me
So they will have an opportunity
to set themselves free
To live and to enjoy
the life they never had
No more depression inflicted
and making people sad
The new and hopefully, a favorite
witches brew to come
Still impossible to know
how popular it will become
We can only pray, and hope
that what I do and say
Will bring changes for the better
each and everyday
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-09-06 22:21:21]
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:54:51 AM AEST
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I was captured by the title
But before I read reversed
I looked into your recent posts
And quickly read the first
The second held the trance
That the first did put in place
And as I finished up the third
A smile adorns my face
Very entertaining reads, all. Going to investigate more of your wonderful work.
Nice write Bruce
Nazmythian ~
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:55:16 AM AEST
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Lol that is very well written poem.
I likeed your first witches brew poem too. |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by veramouse on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:12:44 AM AEST
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Hubble bubble toil and trouble...........
and, witches work is best left for women........
pretty spooky stuff, i might have to concoct a brew......or two of my own.
Vera |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:38:04 AM AEST
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Wow! A brew to knock out depression? How wonderful. I want some of that! Nice continuation of the first. Write on, Bruce!
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 09:48:30 AM AEST
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another delight Bruce
Michelle |
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Re: My Witches Brew (Continuation 2)
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:00:31 PM AEST
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i like this 1 maybe even more than the first two
nice work |
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