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Love
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:56:46 PM in AEST
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My heart is shattered
Just like broken glass
But the broken pieces cut whatevers left
Everything going wrong, nothings going right
This happens everytime
Just cant take it anymore
Love is never Beautiful love Is hideous
Destorying everyone in its path
Love destorys. More than death.
Death is pleasant compared to love
Love should be death, Death should be love
Love the pain stays, Death the pain is breif
I wish I died instead of this
Love is hell, souls to sell
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xRotten_Insidex
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2004-09-06 21:56:46]
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Re: Love
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by monophobic on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:03:00 PM AEST
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Re: Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:24:53 PM AEST
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Nice poem... if you want a different title for it, may I suggest Souls to Sell? That, or Never Beautiful, I think would make great titles. I really like the last line, great write.
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