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Disappearing
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:50:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Every time I look in the mirror
Im never happy with what I see
Becoming empty and blank
Forgetting everything I am
But that was in the past
The past isnt the future
Things have changed now
Leaving me with nothing
Binded by thorns, Never to break free
Everythings gone
I am no more than a dream
The roses are wilted, I am withering away
Soon I will be less than even a dream
Copyright ©
xRotten_Insidex
... [
2004-09-06 21:50:04]
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Re: Disappearing
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by monophobic on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:53:30 PM AEST
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| you are what you tell yourself you are, in my opinion, you are very talented, keep writting |
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Re: Disappearing
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:07:58 PM AEST
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| Good write, i wish i could disappear. |
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Re: Disappearing
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by sheri on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:44:17 PM AEST
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| I definitely understand the dissapearing thing. Good write |
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Re: Disappearing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:42:13 PM AEST
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Hey, I know how you feel, and also i guess at times every one would just like to disappear,
your a very good writer. Good Job. |
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