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Last Night
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:22:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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we went for a walk last night
it was so nice to do that with you there
I got to look in to thous eyes that are so blue
I got to see that smile that is so true
we sat down on the swings it felt so right for you to be there with me
I couldn’t stop looking at you and every move you made
on this walk we took it made me see how it use to be
it made me remember all the good times we had
I never want to forget thous times
I never want to lose them all I want to do is add to them
as we started to walk again you looked at me in a way I seen you look at me before
that look way the best look anyone could give
so sweet so soft it took me away
then you gave me I ride back home
we just sat there neither one of use wanted to go
so we sat and held one another close
our faces touching so worm and soft
then the kisses we had your lips so soft and worm
my body shook with every touch it felt so right
I didn’t want to stop neither did you
in that moment time seemed to stop
for it was two harts beating as one
we went for a walk last night that took me away.
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Re: Last Night
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:30:12 PM AEST
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i cant get enough of your poems , this one is realy good. i like the meaning of it. it reminds me of a guy back home. keep posting . angie
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Re: Last Night
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:12:49 AM AEST
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| thank you for the poem bradley. it was nice being with each other again to the point that i want to be with you always...but time can only help us with that. tough love will sort itself out cuz i know that we have it...we've been thru a lot together and i know we'll go thru more. love you and you're poems are getting so much better you know! |
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Re: Last Night
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 02:39:05 PM AEST
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Awwww....
--Mothy |
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