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ends that can't meet
Contributed by
monophobic
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your life seems to be so wonderful
you go to church every sunday
you have dinner with your family every night
you help your little brother and sister with their homework
your biggest problem is where your gonna get money to buy your car
you don't see that i force my smile
you think im a bundle of joy
thats all you know, and thats all i want you to know
i am ashamed of who i am
i do drugs and drink alcohol
i cut myself and wish i'd die
you see i'm south while you are north
your so much better than i am
i wish i could spend time to get to know you better
but if you got to know me better i know you'd want to run
your the perfect guy that i'll never have
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2004-09-06 19:00:29]
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Re: ends that can't meet
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by DragonLuvSong on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:06:22 PM AEST
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all i really feel like saying is "wow"
i like it though. |
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Re: ends that can't meet
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:52:59 PM AEST
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| dont compare yourself to someone else. everyone is different and there is no equal comparisons if what you are comparing are different. if you are ashamed, change it. but change it for you, and not someone else. |
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Re: ends that can't meet
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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wow? well, I don't know about that. This has blah written all over it. I give it a 2.7 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: ends that can't meet
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by AndTheFoolShallBurn on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:48:11 PM AEST
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| Really like the honesty. To the point. |
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