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Tree
Contributed by
luinil
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:36:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Waves of red roll through the desert
Barren and lifeless grains of sand
Embrace one lone tree
Once lived fully bloomed
Every leaf forsaking its maker
Parched, dying, carried away
The tree stands deserted in sunset
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luinil
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2004-09-06 17:36:59]
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Re: Tree
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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loneliness, desolution and even sadness rises up out of your words.
Its always a great write that brings out emotion in the reader. well done. |
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Re: Tree
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by arden on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:54:14 PM AEST
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this was very descriptive and beautiful. loved the imagery. lovely poem through and through. a little on the sad side, but still great.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: Tree
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:34:42 PM AEST
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Lovel imagery..Good write....
Jenni |
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Re: Tree
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 01:36:04 PM AEST
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| you think how a tree may be feeling or is. im sad with this poem yet there are others to put a smile on. i did like it and i cherish the word RECYCLE... thank you |
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