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The Boy
Contributed by
Merry
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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His dark head is like yours
Laughter his favorite song
As he rides high above the crowds
Your shoulders as his horse
Teetering back and forth
I follow, enchanted with the scene
Knowing this is us, somehow
Within our secret dream
He turns to wave at me
His blue eyes full of mirth
Happiness is but a breath
To breathe and it is gone
Like dreams disperse in mist
Their secrets safely kept
Shared only in the heart
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-09-06 17:08:09]
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Re: The Boy
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by Luinil on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:40:15 PM AEST
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| wow this is absolutely beautiful * |
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Re: The Boy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:42:55 PM AEST
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| awwww merry, somethings so fleeting, while others are with us forever. well done. |
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Re: The Boy
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:25:10 PM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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Re: The Boy
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:38:48 PM AEST
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( Sighs and thinks....damn I love the way you write)
Roses..you know where...for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: The Boy
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by Biker on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:06:18 PM AEST
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Merry
your writting is like a fine composed photograph. Can see the main subject in sharp focused color, the rest is mono and out of focus. Oh...you forgot the Bandana ;o)
Hugs and XXX
r r |
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Re: The Boy
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:39:54 AM AEST
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Children are such an incredible inspiration. Filled with mystical qualities, innocence, purity. Wonderful as always.
Stitch |
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