|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
PINK SUICIDE
Contributed by
Alina
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
I count you one by one
I make sure the dose is enough
And when you've all gone down my throat
I sit and smile.
In my dreams of proper mothers and pretty
children
The clouds float pink
I open my eyes
With blue dressed men ripping me of my clothing.
Mother's not there they say
Must have had a bad day
The IV leaves it's schizophrenic mark
Of an unfateful memory.
The charcoal is too much
You sicken me to see you, mother
I should be in angelic light
But I'm in the hell you helped create.
The next awakening I have
Is to my cold numb body
In a white, "harm free" room
Suicide not permitted.
As those smurfs feed you
the pills
That will keep your brain from falling....
Lost and so confused
That day of PINK SUICIDE
Is still calling.
Copyright ©
Alina
... [
2004-09-06 15:52:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: PINK SUICIDE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:56:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Intriging title.
Pink Suicide...sounds like the title means more then it is portrayed to mean in the poem. But anyways excellent poem!^_^
Such a serious tone.!Pink Suicide listens the act! so kewl... |
|
|
Re: PINK SUICIDE
(User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:15:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
intense
but i like it. the title is catchy and and ur story is amazing .thanks for posting ur poem. angie
|
|
|
Re: PINK SUICIDE
(User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:58:42 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
cew poem,i understand the words so perfect,i've been there,and i've seen it all,keep up the good work,keep the poems comen
savedbydeath |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
