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untitled
Contributed by
wild_girl121
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:08:01 PM in AEST
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i look at the stars and i see a beautiful image,
thats dark and mysterious. my friend its 4am
on a monday morning, why am i wake at this hour
levi's sweet vocie is all i hear, and this is as quiet as
the house will ever get...........
why am i awake you probably still wonder.
well my friend, i got a call about an hour ago
from dear cody. he is so random , but thats what i love about him
3 am my friend is kinda early, and cody well he's gunna keep me up in
a blunder of wonder for another hour or so..... why this i don't know,
but cody is only cody is cody you know?
my friend rest is waiting and calling my name i think ill throw the towel in now
awake i will be in a blunder of wonder. its 4 am Goodnight my friend.
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Re: untitled
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by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:39:42 PM AEST
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I have to give you props.
Not many people can properly use the "number" effect(as I call it) to make it remotely decent in their poem.
This poem is truely ambiguos/yet forhtright.^_^. |
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Re: untitled
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:55:50 PM AEST
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| thanks. i was only half awake and just when my friend called me i was goin to sleep or atleast trying to. im not that good at writing cuz i just started to. angie |
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:43:56 PM AEST
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G9ood work and good rest.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: untitled
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by tears_of_blood on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:12:33 PM AEST
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thats was agood poem and i like your poem as much as you do mine haha well keep it up
brad |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:47:06 PM AEST
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great work once again.
wiildejohnny. |
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Re: untitled
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:01:54 AM AEST
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| okay.. um right. it started out great, but then someone called. wow, random. kinda disturbed the emotion and flow of it. it's not bad it just kinda got weird in the middle. beginning and ending r great tho! |
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