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One Heart
Contributed by
longforgottenlove
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:58:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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One Heart
Locked behind a closed door
One Heart
Broken so many times before
One Heart
Sitting and waiting
Waiting for someone to find the key
God only knows
Who that person will be
It will take someone special
Someone who is true
I can only hope that someone is you
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longforgottenlove
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2004-09-06 14:58:03]
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Re: One Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Versifier on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:52:49 PM AEST
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An unassuming 'lil poem. A good read.
If you like made it longer and like cut out the last line and replaced it with a broader verse, it would be even better.^_^ |
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Re: One Heart
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:38:52 PM AEST
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I think it's perfect just the way it is... and I don't write short poems like this... I like to read them though...
Great write... beautifully crafted... simplify... simplify... sometimes is best...
Works well here...
~Donna~ |
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Re: One Heart
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by Heartfilledblood on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:34:04 PM AEST
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Really good poem. april. Gread job :)
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