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Pang

Contributed by Versifier on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Trapped in a state of endless memory
Where the future is forever distant
When now is instantly was
A frustrating daze of uselessness
A vexing haze
- A confusing phase.
A confliction of all mortal thoughts
A dictation verse freedom sought
A catastrophic war never fought
-Trivial dour forever besot.
Religious reasoning left to rot
Evanescent presents bereft of the heart.
Unkempt morals displayed in truth
Cruel mankind holds little ruth
Mask for sale in infinite ticket booths
Timid creatures attached to bold roots
Infusorian scum clinging to dirty boots.
Switching moods
- Diverse broods.
Rude modes
- Forever foes.
Balanced ways
- Treatment swayed.
Hearts unscathed
- RULES!...behaved.
Tentative stanza
- Perpetual pitched tune.
Sound soothe
- Obtained old groove.
Clamorous mute
- Force gained brute.
Open eyes, BLIND!
- Blind Eyes Opened Wide.
Ignorance is prejudice;
Arrogance is ignored truths.
Connection is what’s achieved in relative;
Analogies are what connect true relations.
Peninsula is land surrounded-by it and water;
Island is it- and water.
Haiku is arts envisions;
Music is envisioned art.
This is THIS!
That not THAT!
Easy to comprehend;
Difficult to explain.
Though lazy wits may never know…
The feeling of the fading mind provides more pang.
©Timothy Parris

Copyright Â© Versifier ... [ 2004-09-06 14:55:19]
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Re: Pang (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:01:43 PM AEST
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cew poem,its very much different from alot of poem but hey thats poetry for ya,keep up the good work...and welcome to YPDC...its really cew here,later

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