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Staring me
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:21:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You think you know mw
But you know me not
Can you understand
My crazy plot
Where I am
The hero
and the foe
Twist and turns
are always there
death is lingring
Then a shine of hope
put out
as soon as it came
where I play
the whole cast
so many faces
so many lines
do you think you still know me
think again
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
... [
2004-09-06 11:21:26]
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Re: Staring me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:48:25 PM AEST
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very unique and interesting style
i really like the way you put "I am The hero and the foe"
very well written* |
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Re: Staring me
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by ginnginn11 on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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i really like it but i didn't really understand it...
~Toots~ |
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