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I Dreamt Of You
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I dreamt you were with me,
keeping the badness away.
I dreamt you whispered to me,
"everything's gonna be okay."
I dreamt you told me,
I was all you thought of.
I dreamt you held me,
and showed me your love.
I dreamt you talked to me,
what a long conversation.
I dreamt you were watching,
as time passed by.
I dreamt you wiped my tears away,
every time I cried.
I dreamt you had my back,
when I got into a fight.
I dreamt you were watching me,
as I slept at night.
I dreant of you wearing black,
upset 'cause it wasn't blue.
Hey guess what Shadow?
All those dreams were of you...
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-06 03:00:00]
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Re: I Dreamt Of You
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 03:03:59 AM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful
I enjoyed this alot
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: I Dreamt Of You
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:46:26 PM AEST
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| pretty! |
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Re: I Dreamt Of You
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:40:24 AM AEST
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Hey, hang on a minute, you've nicked my dream Candice, hehehe!!
Except he is a woman in mine! Luckilly for me eh!!
A very fine write which reminds with vividness of a dream I often have. I like it very much.
Of course I wish you luck with your gamble, although after reading what I have it shouldn't for you be such a gamble and I can see that you shouldn't need too much luck either!
If he reads what you have written for him how can you possibly fail!
Just please be a bit careful, you don't want everything to go tits-up now! But I'm sure you know what you're doing, so you don't need me telling you this!
Try not to be too nervous now, although I think a showing of nerves sometimes shows how much someone really cares about what they are doing!
With love
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Re: I Dreamt Of You
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 02:27:10 AM AEST
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Dean, Thank you so much for the vote of confidence, I really needed it. It is nice to know that someone believes in me, side from my bestfriend that is. I really feel that he is the ONE for me, which only scares me even more. I really hope I talk to him before I talk my self out of telling him. I have talked my self out of it like three times already. That's kind of bad. Thank you for you kind words.
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