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Enslaved
Contributed by
tabby
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:27:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I pick me up,
You put me down,
Drinking out of this eternal cup,
Trying not to frown.
I know I’m not good enough,
You’ve told me a thousand times or so,
You mind games are too rough,
These dire rhymes are too shallow.
I can’t say what I desire,
I can’t say what I need,
Everything will backfire,
All my thoughts must be buried.
I’m not good at this,
I’m not good at that,
When will you leave me alone?
I won’t be saved,
I’ll always be enslaved.
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tabby
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2004-09-06 10:27:28]
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Re: Enslaved
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by RequiemForADream on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:57:37 AM AEST
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Very good write. It makes a person think about themselves. Keep it up.
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Re: Enslaved
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by Sweetheart on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:46:15 PM AEST
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| Really good write. I know where you are coming from. Self confidence is the hardest thing for me to deal with. A lot of people tell me that i'm not a failure, but honestly I still feel like one. I can't do great things most of the time because I let my self esteem control me. Again, I really can relate to this one and I liked it. |
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