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Dedicated to you
Contributed by
inoc
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:27:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I dedicate this poem to you
from our God up above
the Loving Lord is here alive
in all our words of love
he cherishes all the sweet comments
that we all decide to make
and looks upon each of us
with the decisions that we take
He treats us like a new born child
slowly gives us a day at a time
He gives us a His road to walk
knows what hills we can climb
when times are tough and we feel alone
we often think where is He!?
but we must keep patience
and make our own history
we strive fast forward
to hold on fast
because times like this
will go on past
so we must care for others fast
remember the golden rule of life
we should make it to the end
without much strife
remember to keep His commandments
no matter how hard we try
it is probably the only Godly thing that we can't do
it's easier for a man to cry
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-09-06 09:27:43]
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Re: Dedicated to you
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:16:25 PM AEST
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Very awesome masterpeice full with faith, hope, joy, understanding, strentgh and great testomony of our father's un dying luv for all.
Great writing!
luv, huggs, smiles, amen,
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Re: Dedicated to you
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by Bruce on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:24:24 PM AEST
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| A Masterpiece |
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Re: Dedicated to you
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:35:42 PM AEST
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Great write, Inoc..... Thanks for sharing this
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