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Jerk
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:38:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Jerk I hate you, I told you how I felt,
You comforted me and said things to make my heart melt,
I was still fragile but my anger started to subside,
Then you were a jerk, how we said goodbye was why I cried.
Jerk I hate you, but this cut I dug deep for you,
Jerk I hate you but this proves I love you too.
This cut I feel guilty for cutting, I cry more,
You promised you would never hurt me! That I was worth dying for!
Whether you meant to or not I feel as though you lied,
You hurt me! You hurt me! Oh you left me there and I cried.
I cried for you to go, go away, I can do this on my own.
You left me with another pain for my heart to moan.
Jerk I hate you, I hate you more to this very day,
You had no right to treat my life that way,
Jerk, I was a fool, my dreams meant nothing to you.
And jerk there is only one logical thing left for me to do
GOODBYE!
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EmSal
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2004-09-06 01:38:56]
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Re: Jerk
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by wild_girl121 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:00:10 AM AEST
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hey i liked your poem but trust me cutting doesnt solve things, been there done that... it only made things worse for me and my friends are what helped me out ...
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Re: Jerk
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:05:02 AM AEST
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this was a very frantic poem, or it feeled frantic, which shows what your going through and the confusion your in very well. Cutting is extremly bad for you, from first hand expierience. I still do it though, so I wont speak anymore on the subject, as I'd be a hypocrit
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Re: Jerk
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 04:16:07 PM AEST
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| great poem! really nice piece of solid anger. |
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