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naked
Contributed by
monophobic
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i have no ability to feel. throughout the years of my life i've realize people are my true enemies. no need to be monophobic any longer because as long as i'm alone nobody can hurt me. i want to be able to breathe the freshest of air however my legs are tied to a rock thats already sunk to the bottom of the ocean and the weight is more then i can pull. i realize i must somehow cut the rope to the rock and breakaway. this is exactly what i've been trying to do but without a knife it is the hardest thing to do. im scared for when i reach the surface because i never want someone to tie me to another rock and toss me in the ocean. my biggest fear is to never escape, an emotionally problem and i only have myself to get out of it.
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Re: naked
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by EmSal on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:48:19 AM AEST
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Interesting write. But can't you hurt yourself? Sometimes even worse than any other person? Prehaps not, but if I were alone, without anyone, I sure would be able to find and make new pains for myself. Anyway just wanted to say interesting write, hope you sort things out soon, for your sake.
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Re: naked
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:23:57 PM AEST
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I dig the metaphors. I give this a 3.9 on the Nortiscale.
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