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Unforgivable
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:43:28 PM in AEST
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Unforgivable
I hope that I've made a dent in your life
Because you have made one in mine
And I want our feelings mutual
Something we can't turn away from
But I don't know if I'm deserving enough
To ever have you in my life after all I've done
Pushing you away every time
When you needed me most
Pushing you out of my life
When you wanted to end yours at all costs
I'm sorry for what I was in the past
All I can say is that I've changed since then
I've learned from all that I did
But if you can never take me back
I would fully understand
Some things are unforgivable
As they are unforgettable
Sometimes second chances
Are never deserved to be given
And some things are left undone
To be mended by someone else
When the time comes
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Re: Unforgivable
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:05:32 PM AEST
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| another heart wrencher. wish u the best xx |
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Re: Unforgivable
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:29:29 PM AEST
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Touching and heart breaking.....
Jenni |
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Re: Unforgivable
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:00:33 AM AEST
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wow what a beautfil poem full with such emotion and guiltiness,hopefully 1 day u can see everything in possitive light...nice wirte later
savedbydeath
u know who!!! |
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Re: Unforgivable
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by cheech on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:19:50 PM AEST
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aww such a pretty peom,LOL,no seriously this was such a great write u really do have a hand in writting keep up the good work and keep it coming
cheech |
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Re: Unforgivable
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:18:40 PM AEST
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| every well wrote i hope you the best |
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Re: Unforgivable
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by assassinatorgirl on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:04:53 PM AEST
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| aw that's so sad T_T great job tho, it's wonderful. |
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