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simplicity
Contributed by
megan
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:04:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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your a aplifide tv screen,
a double scooped ice cream cone.
a single purple flower in a huge green field.
the sweet softness to a snoeflake
landing on my nose.
your life
your love
your my life
your my love
Copyright ©
megan
... [
2004-09-05 22:04:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:14:43 PM AEST (User
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interesting. you need to check your grammar and the last four lines are just i dont know so simple and dont really have any place in your write. |
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