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Do you remeber
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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(chorus)
do you remember
in september
do you remeber when...
way back then
i was only two
and it was done so soon
you and mom was no more
you walked out that door
for the very last time
i remember clear as a bell
we had to sell..
we had to sell our home
we went bank rupt
our lifes were then erupted
now you think
and blink your ways
for the days to lay
your head down
you luve smilng
we live frowning
when i walk down the isle
i dont expect you
to be there
waving to us
i'll put up a fuss
if you show up
(chorus)
do you remember
in september
do you remeber when...
way back then
i was only two
and it was done so soon
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Re: Do you remeber
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:19:31 PM AEST
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| powerful write. my dad left my mom and me when i was two also. of course the only thing i know about him is his name and it ends right there. |
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Re: Do you remeber
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by Bruce on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:12:25 AM AEST
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| sorry for the unhappiness, hope he gets to read it and the message |
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Re: Do you remeber
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:12:41 AM AEST
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| Nice Write, i loved the lyrics. My mom and dad split up when i was young. |
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