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Inner Battle
Contributed by
silverjade
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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burn off my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
refuse the feelings that lie hidden within
burn of my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
release me, i want to be free
and each time I take a step foward
Iam pulled back by magic
and bound even tighter to my heart
I cry, asking for guidance
but Iam neglected by divinity
for Ive pushed myself far away from my roots
I no longer live
I no longer breath
Iam dead
without a heaven to reach out for
Iam lost,
I bleed.
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2004-09-05 21:53:49]
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Re: Inner Battle
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:28:02 PM AEST
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aww nice work but u outa know we dont control everything about ourselves,i really do hope u dont feel like ur dead and theres no heavens to reach,well anyways great work and keep it up
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Re: Inner Battle
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:29:55 PM AEST
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| well some of the grammar mistakes in this made this confusing. i had no idea what you were meaning in some of this. everyone is lost all of the time. they are never found as you might say. if you let your emotions get to you, they will eventually destroy you. |
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Re: Inner Battle
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by silverjade on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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| yeah i know but the point of this poem is to let others know how everyone is in costant battle with themselves. |
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