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result of eternity
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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everything feels lonely
everytime i smile i lie
and the clear tears you've wept
i'll match them with crimson
don't tell me i don't deserve this
when i'm such a beautiful liar
because this truth would make you hate me
and only they knows me
my soul spread like blue prints
matching his in every way
don't you love the way i smile for you
and come home and die for me
because i dream of dying
and wake up crying
realizing that my dreams weren't real
i'm sorry, love
but i'm going to hurt you
and make you see
this is the consequence of being what you've made me
because i'm the result of everyone's love
this is the consequence of being my parents child
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2004-09-05 20:25:41]
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Re: result of eternity
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:51:30 PM AEST
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grr...
he not *they |
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Re: result of eternity
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:17:48 PM AEST
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| very good poem, the energy that comes from u wanting to die is so brilliant and strong! Great job! |
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Re: result of eternity
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:20:11 PM AEST
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| powerful and much emotion put into this. everyone deserves to die...that is why we all die eventually. but there is no point in speeding up the eventual, you might regret it or something. |
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Re: result of eternity
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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| It sucks that everybody feels like dying, it sucks for people to be depressed, it sucks for people to be broken heared. Everything sucks!! |
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