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Fear
Contributed by
luinil
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:36:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Stand alone at the top
Blowing wind thrusts you further
Wipe the sweat from your eyes
Look down upon nothing
Silence your hammering chest
Do not fear the climb
Rest well in your height
Fly away without dread
Think not upon the fall
Close your eyes, jump instead
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luinil
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2004-09-05 19:36:01]
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Re: Fear
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:04:15 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. it has a very lonely and secluded feeling to it. i don't know if it was intentional, but this was great. |
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Re: Fear
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by waos on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 09:20:08 PM AEST
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cool, you did a good job on this. i really liked how
you described what it feels like to be up there. |
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