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A Long Time Ago

Contributed by tears_of_blood on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:54:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

one day along time ago i took your hand
one day along time ago i held you face so close to mine
one day along time ago i looked in to thous beautieful eyes
one day along time ago you looked at me the same way
one day along time ago we had our first kiss it took me away
one day along time ago i looked at you and said 3 works that made you so happy
one day along time ago you said the same 3 words back to me i felt unstopabol
one day along time ago we had are first pashinit night it was so beautieful
one day along time ago i made you cry and had to wap the tears away
one day along time ago i took your trust and threw it away
one day along time ago i made that love start to fade away
one day not so long ago i looked at you but i could tell i didnt make you feel the same way
one day not so long ago i know everything i have done tore you up in side
one day not to long ago you looked at me and told me you still loved me the same as befor
one day not so long ago i told you the same but made it so hard for you to belive
one day i broke that hart i cared about and loved so much that day was the crappiest day

Copyright © tears_of_blood ... [ 2004-09-05 17:54:17]
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Re: A Long Time Ago (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:02:12 PM AEST
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well i don't want to remember that day...it'll take a while...i just hope we can move on from this. i hope you can achieve what you want to. remembering the good stuff is better and maybe one day all the bad stuff will be a ghost of the past...

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