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Cutting
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you think we seek your sympathy?
Then i'm afraid you are terribly mistaken.
We don't want your tedious attention,
Even though we are solitary and forsaken.
It is a great process of escapism.
Do you think this is a stupid game?
It's our own unique solution,
to drive away the mental pain.
You ought think again my friend.
For if I really sought your care.
I would slit my throat in front of you.
till you stood in a bloody mere.
Copyright ©
gothicangel
... [
2004-09-05 16:12:22]
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Re: Cutting
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:15:30 PM AEST
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We don't want their sympothy, or their attention! It is a mental escape! Great Job bro!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Cutting
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:58:34 PM AEST
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oh yes!
i did like this |
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Re: Cutting
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 08:10:13 AM AEST
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| Very confronting! Unlike anything I have seen of late, this poem speaks volumes. Full of angst and torment I totally enjoyed reading it. Good work! |
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Re: Cutting
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:07:39 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, vivid and true, many people going through this feel the same way, escape is better than persacution, though I have lost many a friend to suicide, your poem has given me some aspect, though small into how they must of felt, Ive been there though, lived, I didnt feel this way, didnt feel anyway, Cool poem you really put this subject in the light. |
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Re: Cutting
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by TheGrim on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:29:08 AM AEST
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| you have a very nice rhythm to this poem. You're a good writer. |
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