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Indescribable
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Today's just yesterday's tomorrow.
Each day is a DejaVu.
Stuck in a circle of resemblance.
Is this what they call life?
I'm sleeping awake.
I'm awake when I sleep.
If I didn't wake up, I'd still be sleeping
People who say life is a bed of roses
usually complain about sleeping in thorns.
I'm alive but still dead.
Dead but still alive.
I'm a wandering dead person.
I would rather die completely,
than be alive but still dead inside with no life.
I'm nothing but still something.
I'm no ones anybody.
I'm depressed and solitary.
The walls I build around me
to keep out the sadness, also keep out the joy.
I hope for derestriction from this hell.
While there is life, there is hope.
While there is hope, I`m alive.
Never deprive my hope, it is all i have.
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gothicangel
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2004-09-05 16:08:01]
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Re: Indescribable
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:24:23 PM AEST
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| WONDERFUL! i generally dislike poems that do not rhyme but this is one of the best i have come across, i love how u use being awake and sleeping and sleeping but awake, i totally know how u feel. anyways best of luck for u, take care! |
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Re: Indescribable
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:42:39 PM AEST
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i love all the contradictions in this...i just love the way it's written. unique
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