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What now?
Contributed by
brown_eyez_
on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:41:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i'm never going to feel secure
and together again,
i'm helpless all the same.
i needed you
and you were always there.
but not anymore,
i'm lost without your strength,
broken without your love,
torn inside and out without
your presence around.
not knowing when
or if ever i'll see you again
kills me over and over.
tears flow out
and don't stop for hours.
i'm weak and scared,
forgotten and alone.
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brown_eyez_
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2004-09-05 12:41:06]
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Re: What now?
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 01:14:02 PM AEST
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it's going to take a lot of time and you trying to move on...don't stick in the past...it will destroy you...great poem
please comment on my work too
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Re: What now?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:11:49 PM AEST
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great emotional write, i pray things get better for you.
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