Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-November 03:12:44 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

You make me wanna

Contributed by Pollo_Picante1120 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Hey you standing there
Tall and handsome
That outstanding smile
Those eyes are so mysterious
I never know what to do
You got that girl with you
But she's not like me
She's too quite
She's too snotty
So come with me
You make me wanna
Leave the one Im with
This is what you do
Make me wanna
Pull you aside
Rush you into everything
My personality traits
Turn upside down
I've been waiting for you
Just letting you know
That your on my mind
Almost all the time
So tell me why
We've kissed at least
Four times and we're not together
Everyone asks about us
Are we dating?
I need to know
I risked my once strong realtionship
Just to be with you
See my days are cold without you
Though my heart is aching for you
I keep on running back to you
You make me wanna
Go back to my old ways
Do you think Im gonna give it up to you
Just cuz you gave me that kiss
Make me wanna fall again
You tell everyone that you like me
But you dont wanna ask me out
Im on your team
but im gonna forfeit sooner or later
But I can't anymore
I've done too many things
I've said too much
Your so irrisistable to me
Once I dance with you
Your gonna really want me
Im make you wanna
Hold me tight and never let go
Wanna call me your girl
Now all your plans messed up
I've gone and switched up
But I guess i'll give you try

Copyright © Pollo_Picante1120 ... [ 2004-09-05 12:16:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: You make me wanna (User Rating: 1 )
by BSteel on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:02:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

it really is intense the end is confusing but the begining really reminds me of a girl

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com