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Decend
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 08:13:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The Pain I feel,
Is so unreal,
It burns inside,
My soul is blind,
I ask the Lord why,
As the heaven's cry,
I see the lake of fire,
Is it hell that I desire,
My mind is over come by thoughts of you,
While my heart sceams at the moon,
Black clouds cover my sky,
But my love for you will never die,
Let a thousand nails rip into my chest,
Allow me to take my last breath,
With that breath I will say,
I will love always,
Is this the end,
As I start my decend,
To hell I will go,
My love for you will forever grow.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2002-07-17 20:13:54]
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Re: Decend
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 11:09:43 AM AEST
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Your poetry is so beautiful
very creative and inspiring
I enjoyed reading this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Decend
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 11:06:08 AM AEST
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| this poem coupled with the expression in 'have you ever' is just awesome, it's like a feeling building up and bursting out of you, amazing wonderful poetry |
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