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Wonder
Contributed by
oreo_kisses
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Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:44:12 AM in AEST
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I wonder where
You went
After you died
What your life was like
Without your family
Your friends
Your everything
I want you to be happy
Yet I don’t know
If you are
Or not
I live life with questions
Just waiting to be answered
Yet I know they wont be
It’s impossible for them to be
I remember all the times we spent
But yet I don’t
I have lived my life with all them
Blocked out
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oreo_kisses
... [
2004-09-05 00:44:12]
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Re: Wonder
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:54:04 PM AEST
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yup....way to many unanswered questions...blocking things out is something we must do so that we can go on with our lives and hide the pain...even though it eventually comes right back to us with time....
please comment on my work too
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Re: Wonder
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 02:18:51 AM AEST
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The last stanza is very intriguing. I really like the way you said that... well done.
Take care, may answers be granted.
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