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Post Script From '02
Contributed by
Rae
on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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we are all ordinary, don't you see that?
but i've got something different for you.
it's kept in my eyes and will speak it.
hoping they'll speak louder than the radio downstairs.
ans when you'll sleep tonight,
i'll turn off the lights for you
to see the stars and the moon waiting for you
to understand it, to understand me.
they won't lie... i won't cry...
if you'd only say hi.
there's more to this that i'm writing
that you should see.
there's more to this that i'm saying
that you should picture.
like you and me together.
like crickets singing songs.
like the storms happy with laughter.
like fireflies on the trees.
like you and me under my umbrella.
i could've told you to leave me by dawn
coz it' when our miseries will start.
i could've told you to leave me by dawn
coz you'll be seeing me cry.
i could've told you to leave me by dawn
coz she's waiting for you.
i would.
i would.
tell her, "please stop crying coz
i won't be leaving you, even though
my heart belongs to another,
this is the right thing."
and i'll tell you, "even though
you'll be leaving and
my heart belongs to you,
this is the right thing.
leave, go back to her."
-rae '02. 102202.
Copyright ©
Rae
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2004-09-04 23:25:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Post Script From '02
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 04:45:10 PM AEST (User
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Hmn. Emotive.
I conclude that you should;
a) Comment more,
and
b) stop using 'coz', as it makes this look strange, in my opinion.
Anyway - that's my tuppence. |
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